背!不背没法用!使劲背!
先上模板:
P1: Recently, more and more people are talking about (题目改写). From my perspective, it is totally undoubted that (主论点). The reasons why I believe so are listed as below.
P2: The first point that I want to mention is that (分论点1), and that is because (原因). What is more, it’s easier for us to understand that ( 分论点2), which is because (原因). Last but not the least, we have to admit that (分论点3). The reason behind this is (原因).
P3: From what I mention above, we can easily come to the conclusion that (主论点再来一遍). After all, (分论点改写一遍).
and again,只有模板不教怎么用肯定不是我风格。首先看上面模板的红色字体,可以不用,可以不用,可以不用!除非你思路特别多,特别想写,那我不拦着你。一般有前两个分论点就够字数了,就不必继续折磨自己想第三个。题目改写的意思是让你把题目照抄,或者轻微修改,让它更符合逻辑。其他的我在下面的真题里详细解释怎么cao做。
我们还是拿真题来搞捋一遍思路:
![图片[1]-2025年4月征文模板,先背先默写!!!!-撷墨资料库](https://www.xiemo.vip/data/attachment/forum/202310/12/102506wdkl851ql585k6oe.png)
先说容易被质疑的点:
1.这他niang的明明是“征文”,老袁你非说是议论文,议论你妹!
回答:朋友,别急,我们先捋一下什么叫议论文:
![图片[2]-2025年4月征文模板,先背先默写!!!!-撷墨资料库](https://www.xiemo.vip/data/attachment/forum/202310/12/102506itfld1muuv1xzlmz.jpeg)
我怕我自己嘴笨说不清楚,看看百度对于议论文的定义:剖析事物、论述事理、发表意见、提出主张
我们再看上面的真题,是不是让我们去写“你最爱的工作是什么”以及“你喜欢它的原因”?是不是在让你剖析事物?是不是让你发表意见呢???
结论:别挣扎了,议论文文体就是你需要的。
接下来的问题是,议论文要包含什么内容?就着刚才我们在百度上扒拉下来的定义,我们是不是要发表意见?好,得有意见。
2.“老师,这问题是我最爱的工作,我回答出来的不是我的意见啊!”
回答:如果你写“我最爱的工作是扫厕所”,嗯,恭喜你,确实说对了,这不叫意见。但是如果你写“我认为扫厕所是世界上最美好的工作”,你的意见就来了!懂了么?就是把每一个题目的第一个黑点,变成“你认为XXXXXXXXX”你的意见就来了朋友!
意见有了,你的主论点就有了,而议论文的灵魂就是主论点。
结论:你的意见就是你的主论点
再然后就着你的主论点想若干个分论点(一般俩就够),你的文章脉络就出来了!
所谓分论点,就是你怎么证明你的主论点是对的。还是上面的例子,假设你的主论点是“我认为扫厕所是世界上最美好的工作”,你需要做的就是问自己两个问题:为什么X2
为什么(扫厕所是世界上最美好的工作)X1 ?
回答:扫厕所可以净化环境,让上厕所的人心情愉悦
为什么(扫厕所是世界上最美好的工作)X2 ?
回答:扫厕所可以让我实现自我,获得极大的成就感
ok,你的分论点也有了,填进上面的模板,基本文章雏形就有了。
But,你的文章还不够丰满,不够完整,不够细节,不够有说服力;接下来我们要做的就是在你每个分论点后面,举出一个原因或者例子。具体怎么做呢?继续问为什么!
为什么(扫厕所可以净化环境,让上厕所的人心情愉悦)?
回答:因为我可以拍死所有的苍蝇,让上厕所的人专心那啥。
看,合理不合理?真实不真实?有没有说服力!?!?
我们捋一遍看到题目之后你要做的事情:
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想出你的意见,用“我认为”来造句
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想出你的分论点(一般两个就够),用“为什么”来质问自己的灵魂
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想出你分论点背后的原因或者例子,继续用“为什么”来自己
上面三点都列在你的脑子里或者写在草稿上(用英文朋友,用英文),然后填写在模板里,恭喜你,20+的分数到手。
实战一把:
主论点:teacher is the most rewarding job in this world
分论点1: teacher can give students a better future
原因1: teacher can pass knowledge to students so that they can have a better job in future
分论点2: teacher is a job that can give you confidence
原因2: most people respect teacher and students admire their teacher
ok,自己需要写的就这些,接下来往空里塞就完事了。注意都是小写,不要大写。
P1: Recently, more and more people are talking about favorite jobs. From my perspective, it is totally undoubted that teacher is the most rewarding job in this world. The reasons why I believe so are listed as below.
P2: The first point that I want to mention is that teacher can give students a better future, and that is because teacher can pass knowledge to students so that they can have a better job in future. What is more, it’s easier for us to understand that teacher is a job that can give you confidence, which is because
most people respect teacher and students admire their teacher. (Last but not the least, we have to admit that (分论点3). The reason behind this is (原因).红色部分是第三个分论点,不用写,除非你文思泉涌。)
P3: From what I mention above, we can easily come to the conclusion that teacher is the most rewarding job in this world. After all, teacher can give students a better future and is a job that can give you confidence(注意用and链接).
搞定。收工。下班。
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